HarlequindeRustre's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[finns swords]

Despite the fact that the source images RIGHT THERE ON THE CANVAS do not use a bold black outline, you decided to use one anyway. Couldn't you figure out how to use the eyedropper tool in MS Paint? For that matter, why the heck did you do this in the first place? As an exercise it's generally pointless and as an artwork submission it looks like something a second grader would print out and stick on the fridge with no small amount of pride.

mjflaherty468 responds:

Look i have alot of better stuff on my computer that for some reason i never bother to upload also why are you targeting me specifically i already have enough stress just getting out of finals and now i got to deal with your fucking bullshit hoping for some comments that can actually brighten up this generally shitty day

[John: the fire guy]

Do you even know how shadows work???

mjflaherty468 responds:

look i am just now staring to work with shading now can you not be so critical on my art this is one of my first and only times shading on Ms paint

[demonic hero]

Maybe you should stick to crayons...

mjflaherty468 responds:

fuck off man jesus christ

[madness weirdness]

Copypaste, rinse and repeat

Seems to me that you can only produce something interesting when it involves paper dolls.

mjflaherty468 responds:

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mjflaherty468 responds:

check your own art asshole

[Booty raider]

Did someone call for ANATOMY LESSONS?!

Seriously. Dude. Reference pictures are your friend.

The abdomen's too long, not to mention skeletal (Unless you're Pro-An, this is a problem). The ribcage is nonexistant, the boob that we can see is anatomically incorrect, what with the nipple being in the wrong place, along with the center of gravity for the breasts.

The legs are sausages, having near no definition or differentiation between thighs and calves beyond the blurb of hamstrings on the back. The feet are definitely the worst extremities, with a socklike sillhouette that doesn't fit a boot-covered foot at all.

The ass is probably a seperate entity, what with the rest of the body being anorexic in the extremes(and thus the fat percentage is depleted EVERYWHERE).

The arms are decent, except for the fact that the right hand seems to be a hooklike stub welded to the gun, which seems to be spewing fire, even though it seems to be an automatic weapon(thus not a flamethrower, what with its lack for fuel tanks and such).

The hair's a little funky, due to the figure seeming to be rapidly moving forward and its staying rather plastered to her form. But I'll pass it off to being matted from sweat and stuff...

The face is mysterious, what with the dramatic shadowing, but, like the hindquarters, doesn't seem to fit the rest of the body.

So, overall, the face and arms are the best part of this. The lower half of the body is prolly the worst part, due to its sausage physics

My suggestion is to get some better, WHOLE references, because it looks like you're picking and choosing what parts to use on a drawn figure. ALSO KEEP IN MIND that some reference picture have the subjects at different distances, so you'll want references that are within about the same distance when they were depicted/photographed.

And that's all I got, other than the people who simply stare at various body parts and nothing else are rubes and you shouldn't trust them to get a good idea of the reception of your art on the whole...

Hildebrandt responds:

I dissected people. Don't tell me about anatomy. Bitch.

[SC2 - Zeratul]

Very detailed...

Brilliantly sketched and shaded.

My only problem with this is that it doesn't have enough character and the fact it's just a bust, as opposed to a full on character drawing.

It's good- VERY good- but I'd like to see more next time from this artist...

SuperKusoKao responds:

I would have done the whole character if the bust didn't take up half of my paper :P

I just wanted to draw his little 3D picture thing down at the bottom of the screen anyway.

[Venician Statue Fountain]

Wow

Saw your spam and went to this. Sorry to say, but you're not exactly hot shit either, friend.

Yes, yes, it's very nice and all, but it's A) not very original or visionary, so it can't really be called are and B) Althought this has detail and good light and so on, it also lacks enough realism.

So next time you spam, please work on a little stone texturing, a little more shade, and some actual composition when you slap down a link. After that, you're golden (no pun intended).

VidGameDude responds:

it's brass (no pun intended), but i guess you cant please everyone = /

[Deathwing]

Eh...

.... Your rendition of Neltharion, the fallen Earth Warder, is nice, but it doesn't... capture his evil enough...

7's all I'm gonna give this, `cause you did pretty well with the linework, colors, and shading...

Nekow responds:

that's harsh