HarlequindeRustre's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Africa Dudes]

Schme...

Watched this the three times. Didn't get any funnier. In fact, I suffered,

While there were an abundance of cute gags and so on, the length of this, not to mention the painfully extensive non-jokes, really kills this. While I appreciate doing collabs in such and such a fashion, you really didn't do yourself any favors by using rather, uh, dry situations.

Not to mention most of this bordered on extremely (annoyingly) racial. Not racist, per se, but very stereotyped and just plain wrong. I chuckled at some parts for about five minutes, and then the horrible suspense of "When The Fuck Is This Over" Syndrome set in...

In future, please work on the actual humor portion more than what you did here. Also, please try to mix up the humor- simple conversational and situational humor is gonna bore the tears out of people if they have to take it straight. So try putting in some lowbrow with the high and highbrow with the low.

So yeah.

Stamper responds:

i don't recall anyone twisting your arm

"hey guys, i hate drinking piss but i somehow choked down the whole gallon - welp off to work"

[Naruto- Bleach Parody]

Eh.

I hope you get better and make a second one like this. This flash is pretty cool, but some of the magic of your interesting premise were doused by the limit of your skills. You still did fantastically with what you had, but I'd like to see better designs and a bigger fps and framerate.

Now this is all technical, so all you have to do is practice. You already have quite the pot o' gold fillin' the space between your ears, so don't worry about anything other than becoming an even better animator.

[Bleach 1st opening]

A pretty good attempt.

I'm impressed that you followed the OP closely enough to make an accurate Flash version of it. Some parts were a bit half-assed, but for the most part you kicked ass and took names.

I look forward to seeing more like this from you...

[LARRY episode 2]

'Yes.' 'Shut up!'

Geez, this is nearly perfect. The parts that lack are some rare parts of the voice acting (when your voice isn't fully centered in the character voice), such as when Larry says "Hey; that's not a bad idea...", and the animation shortcuts with the staff animation in the walking scene to the stables. Other than that, pure gold.

But, in all honesty, the real reason I took off the one point is the fact you killed off the "Yes" assassin. Seriously, the comedy with that guy would have been a good running gag (Other than the "alesman pissing in his stock" and "the random shirtless dude" parts). Plus, the guy's so easy to identify with (I mean, don't you just want to give him a hug when he ends up on the short end of the stick? I know I do...).

So, if you could bring in a necromancer villain that brings back the "Yes" assassin (accidentally), that might fit in with the story (as well as make your work load for gags a little less straining) and please a small group of your fans (me, for example).

I'd tick off another point for Pup's leg, but you'd apologized for that in the credits (plus, he can still run like a muthafucka). I wonder how Larry's gonna explain the missing leg to his more attentive family members("It was the sewer rats, I swear!" "I tripped with the kitchen knife and fell on Pup!" "I don't know!" "What? His leg's missing?! How?!").

Well, that's all I got. I hope the next episode doesn't take you so long, and I wish you luck with your life (seeing as life gets in the way of living...).

[Ninja versus demon]

Meh.

The ending could have been better, and the opponent could have been more interesting.

Whatever. Still pretty good...

[Mastermind 5]

Hm.

Definitely expected, but the timing still makes it gold.

[Harry Potter INA]

Erm...

This is good, but could you do a sequel with smoother animations and even funnier references? It's a good gimmick, as far as I'm concerned...

[Leek Clock Spin]

Cute...

... but unoriginal. Howeva, I give you props for doing something associated with the CC that isn't anti-Clock or retarded, so enjoy.

Rated this four, I believe. Have a good day/night.

[Tankmen Rpg (preview!)]

Pretty cool.

Heweva: I think "Fan Fair" is mean to actually be "Fanfare".

Tell me if I'm wrong...

Snipper64 responds:

your probably right, my grammar sucks, thanks for that

[Hunting to Piconjo]

Wow.

A serious flash from you. It's, like, an apocolyptic sign or something.

A pretty decent one, at that, though with an anticlimatic ending (although I suppose there's a meaning behind that).

Well done in general (except for Piconjo's slightly gay voice acting. Don't overdo it next time, alright?).

Gets a 7 out of 10, could have been better. Keep this kinda work up; we like it.