Nice...
For what it's worth, this is pretty damn good. The only serious problem that needs to be attended to is the timing (see for yourself), and even that isn't too bad. Be sure to tighten up the Frames Per Second in future, and you should be set, dude. You have an incredibly vivid imagination, and I'd like to see it develop into excellence.
Happy New Year, and good luck inter future endeavours.
Sincerely,
Harlequin de Rustre
Thank you all for reviewing this. I will take these critics and try to make the sequel even better.
Good to know...
This is a good premise and a good art style. Just work on the voice-acting a bit more; half the time, they sound like they're choking on a burger.
I see that you're hinting at your previous works, which is an interesting development, and sure to please. Let me know if there is any sort of help the reviewer can be....
I think...
You shoulda left off with just God interrupting Nene's suicide and being just a little weird, and maybe added a shot with Nene looking weirded out(with some tears left on her face)...
Anyways, it's a cute little bit of fluff mixed in with some very funny bits of comedy. Very nice...
Ya gotta love it....
The "AWESOME!!!" action and the really cute humor is just too funny to pass up. It's also great the Tom and... and the Father.... aren't incredibly invincible and that the bad guys do a good job, too(before they are inevitably walloped)
... you've just GOT to to love it...
Royal gutbuster....
Naturally, a comedy collab is going to have me rolling on the floor. Aaaaaaannnd, this is no exception.
My personal favorites were:
Koukaku's: "It makes me feel pretty :3"
SardonicSamurai's: "Damn! The mission has been compromised!"
and the big collab that you oversaw that was at the end: "What's the matter, BROTHER? Too much of a load for you?" (There were a bevy of memorable lines, but I had to pick-and-choose...)
Those three put me on my ass, laughing like an idiot. The rest... appeal to other guys...
Me, it's the stuff that isn't too deep in the whole plot of Metal Gear. It just takes away from the humor for the general public... Simple stuff is the best stuff...
It's jsut a preview, so...
... I can't give it much. The sketchbook quality of the style really draws me, so you may see me there. Interesting premise. Howeva: I don't see a mortal pwning demons that quickly, that easily, or on the fly.
Remember: they've had practice than you'll ever get...
All I can say is brief
Fantastic detail, excellent timing(at least with the convulsions and the hard breathing), the capturing of the feel, sound, and intensity of rage-based insanity and the tedium of therapeutic drivel, and the Sin City-inspired(I think) art style are this piece. I cannot be more direct in what makes this good.
The only things that take away from this are the lacking of plot(as in: a quick prologue, such as the therapist hinting at the situation that has put Pico on the couch, as well as the reason there's such spontaneous action from the authorities...) and the anatomically unrealistic popping of the head(if it could).
It is what it is, and you did with what you had, and you did it well; good job.
Nice...
I can't find this wanting by much. It's a bit stale, but it's still pretty cute, and keeps a bit of the magic. However, it's made a little weak by addition of the manager where there was none, but it's still pretty good.
What I can say is that you've been good from the getgo, and you'll make it further than the standard guys, for sure. Just keep implementing your ideas, and improvise like Flecko.
... and now I'm starting to sound like a broadway manager from song whippy-dippy movie. Wonderful.
Move along folks, nothing to see here...
Smell ya later, dude...
Sarcastic, poignant, legendarily weird. That is all you need to know.
Age 26, Male
Joined on 3/5/08
Artiface 
Saint - Chapter 2 
Nene's Sorrow 
Fatherly Bonds 
MGS: Flash Collab DISC 02 
Trouble in Hell-Teaser 
Pico: Therapy 
Flecko 2